OUGD601 - Introduction Feedback

Following my supervisors deadline suggestions before the next tutorial, I began drafting an introduction, I sent this in advance of tutorial 2 this was sent back via email in advance of this tutorial with suggestions and improvements. These changes were invaluable as from this feedback I could acknowledge this original draft lacked a sense of critical direction not explicitly stating how I aim to answer my proposed research question. Answering these questions labelled within the feedback helped create a far more objective and critical introduction to my COP research proposal.